tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3686889623254375789.post8235901700764930835..comments2023-07-27T14:10:57.597-07:00Comments on ~ rice in the cupboard ~: A February LamentEmilyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02608421232179032744noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3686889623254375789.post-35297890942523858302009-03-17T06:36:00.000-07:002009-03-17T06:36:00.000-07:00That third stanza is exquisite 'and I know my dark...That third stanza is exquisite 'and I know my darkness is borrowed, running out'<BR/>And I am happy happy you use capital 'I' in your Poetry *smile*<BR/>I have been on a mission trying to stamp out all the small 'i' in Poetry!I always think it brings the whole of ones Poem down a notch, making words appear negative.Just a pet peeve of mine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3686889623254375789.post-45511297565665272202009-02-09T09:58:00.000-08:002009-02-09T09:58:00.000-08:00Thank you, sir :)Thank you, sir :)Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02608421232179032744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3686889623254375789.post-59664446387991758692009-02-08T09:51:00.000-08:002009-02-08T09:51:00.000-08:00Beautiful. Your tone is right on throughout. I lov...Beautiful. Your tone is right on throughout. I love the line about knowing the darkness won't last.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com